http://www.megaupload.com/?d=YIBJFNH5

i started this last night, a chick i work with wanted me to write her a melody for her band, so i came up with this...thing is i don't really know how to end it, so the ending i think on this sucks ass.

anywho what are your opinons?

oh yeah soloing and drums are not my forte...and after the solo it goes back into the chorus.